Indeed I am from the "say less" imply more school of thought...i'e fit it on one side of A4 or less...., I think V has it here..
Fundamentally you need to state that you are NOT an Employee of THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA CORPORATION ... never have been ... and never will be ... and they had no right to assume you had that 'status' just because your birth was registered. BECAUSE THAT WAS NOT A CONSCIOUS ACT ON YOUR PART.
The implications are all there.
As a sovereign one needs not overly explain one's status apart from the most polite and concise statement...sometimes these long long notices (can) read like a list of justifications. I feel ...that one's status
is as it is and to overly explain it is a form of permission seeking. After all what will our adversary say "you not are sovereign because you haven't given good reason"..? Do you know what I mean?
almost like matisse or henry more (modern artists) reduce the thing to its most basic fundamental components and serve that up, the implications are all there. Save the further ammunition for later use when needed. Do not appear to need sanction, infact .....rebuttal or not is of no consequence: as your true status is immutable in reality.
SOVEREIGN: not controlled by outside forces: autonomous; self-governing; independent "a sovereign people" <> "by any peaceful administritive means necessary" - the way of the order.