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Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 9:45 pm
by StimuL8

Constructive Notice of Denial of Consent and NOTICE of Understanding and Intent and Claim of Right

legally "must" is synonymous with ‘may’. The word must has two senses; the imperative and the directive. An imperative
creates an obligation on your part. A directive describes conditions that have to be fulfilled. ‘You must breath to live.’ ‘You must come
to my party through the front door.’ The first is an imperative, the second a directive.

legally "understanding" means: to stand under or to agree with. NOT: do you have comprehension of the words.

legally "application" means: To beg, plead petition, implore, entreat or request.

legally "submit" or "submission" means: To leave to another’s discretion, to bend to the will of another.

legally "registration" means: To sign over for safekeeping. Abandons complete ownership for partial.

legally "required" means: has 2 senses active and passive. active creates an obligation, passive does not. (I require a tuna sandwich. Are you obliged to give me one???)

legally "includes" limits a definition to that which is stated.

legally "otherwise" That which is not stated. "except as otherwise allowed" means "ways allowed though not mentioned" NOT "ways previously mentioned and expressly allowed"

legally "person" means "a human being is not a person because he is a human being, but rather because rights and duties have been ascribed to him. The person is the legal subject or substance of which rights and duties are attributes."

legally "Consent" is: An agreement to something proposed and differs from assent. Consent supposes, 1. a physical power to act; 2. a moral power of acting; 3. a serious and determined and free use of those powers. Consent is either express or implied. Express when it is given viva voce, or in writing; implied, when it is manifested by signs, actions or facts, or inaction or silence, which raise the presumption that the consent has been given.

legally "Conspiracy" means two or more people gathered together to do a criminal or unlawful act.

The legal system has twisted the truth and understanding of WORDS for nefarious ends and to cheat, bilk and coerce (FIAT MONEY) money from the people for no true crimes, and is stealing their LIFE (Hours to do what YOU as a human want to do, in the short time we have here.)


You THE FEDERAL and STATE Governments have by FRAUD and deception, TREASONOUSLY slipped those chains and intentionally ENSLAVED the AMERICAN people, in collusion with international bankers owning the FEDERAL RESERVE (A Private for profit CORPORATION) Sucking their very life from them in the form of TAXES, INFLATION and STATUTES (Imaginary crimes where no crime exists) and Magically creating money out of thin AIR and then having the nerve to charge interest for IT, when the interest for it was never created therefore insuring the BANKRUPTING/THROAT SLITTING of a portion of the hard working American Peoples throats EVERY SINGLE YEAR. This is EVIL INCARNATE in it's most Vile form.

You the FEDERAL and in collusion with the STATE and INTERNATIONAL Governments are SPRAYING the MEN/WOMEN/CHILDREN of various countries with for the most part unknown substances and categorically denying it. (CHEMTRAILS) (which states to me very simply you're doing something UNLAWFUL like trying to kill certain portions of us the people for your own nefarious purposes, AND using OUR, The Peoples money to DO IT.)

The FEDERAL GOVERMENT and the STATE Governments in collusion with by denying answering and releasing information reasonably asked for by it's sovereigns, (people) either Complicitly or Conspiratorily MURDERED over 3000 people in the WORLD TRADE CENTER ATTACKS on September 11, 2001, commiting a heinous act on the families/people of this country. And by allowing the EPA to say the area was safe (A LIE) for occupation murdered BY SLOW and painful death hundreds if not thousands more people, who were there to help and assist their fellow Man. And in the Act of this Destroyed the Careers/Lives of true Americans in your own agencys trying to reveal the TRUTH. In the vein of problem - reaction - solution.

The FEDERAL GOVERNMENT either complicitly or conspiratorily MURDERED all the men/women/children in the Oklahoma Federal Building Bombing then MURDERED a MAN to help coverup their complicity in this heinous act. And in the Act of this Destroyed the Careers of The True Americans in their own agencys trying to bring out the truth.

That Sherry Peel Jackson, and Ed and Elaine Brown, Et. Al have been terrorized, and their very lives stolen from them by a private non Goverment MAFIOSO (IRS) (with the justice system in collusion with) collecting for the FEDERAL RESERVE they never consented to exist, and have been enslaved unlawfully, unjustly, and against all common sense, and if the government can show me one Real English Dictionary that says Voluntary means "I can steal from you, coerce and terrorize you and your family at my whim." then I'll back off this standing, but honestly I couldn't find that in ONE of the 8 I looked in. Their Fair share is WHAT THEY consent to nothing ELSE period. If you don't like this then your just a SLAVER/NAZI using the COLOR OF LAW to commit crimes. Their money (even if it is a COMPLETE and Utter FRAUD) is THEIR life and you have NO RIGHT to DEMAND anything from ANYONE. You are JUST men Born upon this Earth like they are. I believe I read our income tax is based on voluntary compliance, NOT DISTRAINT. This is TRUE crime and Injury upon WE THE PEOPLE, and anyone enforcing this load of excrement should pay for their crimes. I Don't agree with what Joe Stack did, but I can completely understand him. You think that because the Mainstream Criminal media broadcasts your lies, crimes and treachery that WE THE PEOPLE don't see you but WE DO and more and more are waking up EVERYDAY because of your CRIMES, the pipers bill is coming.

Certain CORPORATIONS/PEOPLE WHO OWN THEM in the UNITED STATES fraudulently and conspiratorily control most if not ALL of the Major media networks, therefore NOT publishing and broadcasting relevant facts/truths about, events and denying the truth about MAJOR events in US and World venues. Using the American people as Sheep/Chattel and keeping them asleep to the real issues that threaten their very lives.

That FEMAS main goal is to lock up and stop dissidents to your tyrannical overlording, and the CONCENTRATION CAMPS all over the United States prove this beyond a shadow of a doubt, And that a New NAZI Regime is trying to rear it's ugliness on the face of this world.

That the BATF and other FEDERAL and STATE AGENTS surrounded, falsely imprisoned, enslaved, TERRORIZED and denied access to the media and MURDERED IN COLD BLOOD 80 live men, women and children in WACO Texas (Whom had committed NOT a single Crime) and none of the true criminals were held to pay for their REAL crimes, then Janet Reno Declared Christians as belonging to a CULT. In case you don't know 80%+ of the American population identify themselves as Christian.

That the Maricopa County Arizona, Sheriff and FBI put out a Document stating that US Citizens whom use the Constitution to protect their Rights and People Trying to Police the Police, and Quote: "- Defenders of the US Constitution against FEDERAL GOVERNMENT and UN (Super Patriots)" are labeled as Right Wing EXTREMEISTS. I hate to inform you but The police, The FBI, the NSA, the CIA, the BATF and all other Supposed POLICE agencys are Funded and CREATED BY WE THE PEOPLE, we have the inalienable right to POLICE any of you for unlawful activities, your fiction exists ONLY because of THE PEOPLE.

That Randy Weavers wife and children were murdered in cold blood by the US Governments agents and that this is happening with alarming regularity in the US, By combinations of the US Goverment and even local SWAT teams Murdering and Injuring people who haven't committed any crime and getting away with it Scott Free. I believe the servants have run amock.

That the UNITED STATES is killing innocent IRAQIS who are dying to protect their freedom from TYRANNY and killing American people all in the name of Corporate interests mainly OIL, and soon will do the same to IRAN, for whatever criminal purposes they hide from the American people.

The Nations Fiat currency system is about to fail completely and Barack Obama was put into office so the when this occurs you can blame it on the Black Man and with all the deception and lies and flat out fraud I see in the government, I see this as their card in the hole, I can't stand what Obamas doing to this country but I believe he's being controlled from behind the scenes and I love all human life and using him to cover your own butts is just another EVIL act in the list.

The FEDERAL Government in collusion with the STATE Goverments have, controlled the Education system in America to instead of putting out vibrant intelligent humans capable of good reasoning and analytical skills, to put out simple minded slaves only capable of obeying their master. This too is Evil Beyond Comprehension. Theodore Roosevelt's quote on patriotism woke me up quickly and vehemently, like a hammer striking the head as to whom the REAL TERRORISTS are.

The Federal Government is the main trafficer in illicit drugs in this country with the MAIN goal to make money and keep Black people down in the gutters by encouraging their use among their race then imprisoning them for the act which again 90% of the time there is NO CRIME involved, then profiting by selling bonds on their lives on the open market to make money off their enslavement. Just another heinous act commited by our servants.

The Welfare system is another rung in the same ladder as the drug trafficings main goal keep the blacks and women down and in the gutter so you can control them. Evil Incarnate is the only thought that comes to mind.

The FEDERAL and STATE Governments in Collusion with Major Corporations have conspired to keep FREE ENERGY out of the hands of the people to line their own pockets and perpetuate their control of us all, and that such energy would be readily available to all if not for their conspiratorial efforts.

That the FEDERAL Government in conspiracy with the WORLD HEALTH ORGANIZATION did intentionally predict, plan, plan, create, and deploy the AIDS virus. The STATE Governments and Mainstream media hiding these facts from the general public, prove their complicity in this, and their objective is the culling (KILLING) of at least 9/10 ths of mankind, evidenced by the Strecker Memorandum, and the Georgia Guidestones, which while not DIRECTLY connected, give any one with a mind an agenda for some group behind this purely psychopathic behavior.

There are only Three Real Laws that need to be kept with one being the overall truth of LAW.

Initiate nor accept ANY Force (which the GOVERNMENT does constantly)
Use NO FRAUD in your contracts. (The entire GOVERNMENTAL/JUDICIAL system is a FRAUD)
DO NO Harm to a Neighbor. (the fullfillment of all LAW) (Which the current GOVERNMENT breaks constantly and consistently)
and I will ALWAYS uphold these LAWS.

This is where the statement, Ignorance of the Law is NO EXCUSE, comes from Because TRUE LAW is very, very simple.

I hold the truths to be self evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed with their creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of happiness.
That to secure these rights, governments are instituted among men, deriving their just powers from the CONSENT of the governed, that whenever ANY form of government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the RIGHT OF THE PEOPLE (THATS ME!) to alter or abolish it, and to institute new government, laying its foundation on such principles and organizing its power in such form, as to them shall see most likely to effect their safety and happiness. Because I am not the WHOLE of the nation I cannot force these views on any man but can deny my collusion with them, that violate these tenets.

I DO NOT in any way, shape or form want destruction of government as it is necessary to a degree, to mediate agreements between different groups of men, but I Demand and have a NATURAL RIGHT to have a LAWFUL and JUST goverment and serve this to wake people up to what is missing in OUR CURRENT GOVERNMENT.

I No longer believe the Government LOCAL, STATE or FEDERAL serves anyone but themselves in any way shape or form and ACTS only to it's own ends, (while I DO KNOW that SOME People in all these agencies want truth and peace and prosperity in their lives also, as you see the government destroying their lives repeatedly, even conspiring against the Honest, Truthful elements in its ranks to shut them up and keep their TYRRANICAL POWERS in place no matter what.

The FEDERAL GOVERNMENT and the STATE Governments colluding with them are the MAIN TERRORISTS the American people need to watch out for in this day and age, and we the people should always keep them AT ARMS LENGTH. (I say the STATES collude with because they do not act against the crimes and many times participate or initiate it themselves) If you do not oppose EVIL, you are EVIL.

That the FEDERAL Government is conspiring to remove the RIGHT of the people to defend themselves, by removing their RIGHT to own arms to defend themselves against TYRANNY, OPPRESSION, and unlawful encroachment of their very lives. Gun Control Laws DO NOT EFFECT CRIMINALS only Law abiding people. In the very duplication of the NAZI and COMMUNIST Russia/China/Cuban encroachments upon their peoples.

That the Federal Government has ursurped CHRISTS Church and ANY Church 501 (c)(3) Incorporated is a servant of THE STATE and NOT GOD, and a Harlot in Babylon. What one makes one controls.

I took an OATH to protect and defend the Constitution of the united States of America (NOT A CORPORATION, "UNITED STATES") from all enemies foreign or domestic when I joined the NAVY and I don't feel leaving the NAVY relieved me of that DUTY as a TRUE AMERICAN whom is free and won't tolerate the COMMUNISTS/SOCIALISTS/NAZIS to take and destroy his familys/childrens dreams.

If I can wake up 20 people in this country it will be worth my life, to start the fire that needs to happen in this country to purge it of the evil inherent in its servants, (We've given infants guns and power and they THINK they own the nursery.) who believe they are Caesars. I would rather die than live one minute in THE UNITED NAZI STATES OF AMERICA. (and the government will probably accomodate me on this, because I AM STATING the TRUTH, and they don't like that.)

I'll do this completely Peacefully and Honorably using WORDS OF RIGHT (Like MY LORD) and a Cast Iron Pot banging it in the peoples ears to wake them up from their slumber and truly educating them as to who THEY are and what they've not been shown or taught, but will never try to FORCE ANY MAN to believe, because it is their right and duty to look at the TRUTH/FACT and determine what is in THEIR best interest in THEIR life.

Our Goverment was founded as a Constitutional Republic (REPRESENTATIVE GOVERNMENT) not a Democracy, which is Mob Rules 51% of the people lording over the other 49% sorry don't want it, won't agree to it, won't live in it.

Read everything, Listen to everyone, but only believe what you can verify with your own research.
- Milton William Cooper (Entrapped and Murdered by Apache County Sheriffs)

"Is life so dear or peace so sweet as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? Forbid It, Almighty God! I know not what course others may take, but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death."
- Patrick Henry

“When a well packaged web of lies has been gradually sold to the masses over generations, the truth will seem utterly preposterous and it’s speaker a raving lunatic.”

“‘Necessity’ is the plea for every infringement on human liberty; it is the argument of tyrants; it is the creed of slaves.”
- William Pitt

Only the educated are free.
- Epicetus Discourses

In the truest sense, freedom cannot be bestowed; it must be achieved.
- Franklin D. Roosevelt Speech, Sept 22,1936

You can discover what your enemy fears most by observing the means he uses to frighten you.
- Eric Hoffer

Each time a person stands up for an ideal, or acts to improve the lot of others, or strikes out against injustice, he sends forth a tiny ripple of hope, and crossing each other from a million different centers of energy and daring, these ripples build a current that can sweep down the mightiest walls of oppression and resistance.
- Robert F. Kennedy

Make any law in the name of the children and the people will eagerly accept it.
- Adolph Hitler (IN Mein Kampf)

Consent must be freely given and can never be forced, but can be gained expressly or tacitly.

The government of the United States uses deception/fraud/coercion to gain the consent to govern.

Most people do not know we can deny our consent to be governed.

I cannot in my duty to support THE LAW support any organization which uses FRAUDULENT means to generate agreements and manufacture apparent consent, and murders it's people in cold blood and whitewashes it's own TRUE CRIMES (I was just doing my Job is NOT an EXCUSE). I am more than willing to discuss by notice or contact anything referred to in this affadavit, if you are willing to state on your full commercial liability and under penalty of perjury, as I am (WITH TRUTH AS THE GUIDING PRINCIPLE) and notice me with evidence as to where my standing is flawed, I WILL CHANGE MY STANDING, if I believe, as is my right you are correct. I am a peaceful man and desire TRUTH and Justice, I have reams of evidence to support my standing. But you will rarely find this evidence on any of the mainstream media, which in and of itself tells much of the TRUTH.

The wording in many statutes is misleading to the point of deception.

I Love True Peace officers they have a real and positive effect on our people, and they WILL and DO put their lives on the line fighting TRUE criminals in our land and rescuing people in dangerous situations. I laud and applaud the ones who learn and know the limits of their authority like Sheriff Richard Mack and Officer Jack McLamb. Learn to be a Great Peace Officer and to follow the mandates in your oath, Read Learn and KNOW the Constitution of this once great country, instead of helping to enslave your fellow man. Become the Loved and Revered officers of the past that YOU DESERVE AND HAVE A DUTY TO BE. You are the Last line defenders of LIBERTY. I tear up every time I think of what you have been turned into by fraud and deception, and when the perpetrators of the deceit are done with you, they WILL dispose of YOU and YOUR FAMILIES also.

My written representation has one and only one form and that is James Michael Barnes and no other form of it, will be held to be me the Man, and I have never signed ANY oath or affirmation to the contrary. You CANNOT sign an oath or affirmation in all capital letters, as all capitals doesn't allow a signature or oath, and all capitals represents a dead person, a corporation or a slave. look up Capita Diminutio Maxima for proof, or the Rules of written English, My representation will always be a mix of capitals, non-capital letters and signed by my living hand. A Printed or typed representation will NEVER be ALL CAPITALS, sorry no more fraud or deceit for me.

I Am not nor have ever been a 14th Amendment U.S. Citizen, but am an American National and foreign to "THE DISTRICT", as I was born in this land and have the right to exist here peacefully and with ALL NATURAL/unalienable rights, unimpaired. I Rescind ANY and EVERY document ever from birth signed under Deception/Fraud including but not limited to, social security , drivers licenses, ALL CORPORATE COURT DOCUMENTS, and ANY document WHATSOEVER not signed in a "de jure" venue.

Be it known, that I,_______________________________________________, as of ___________________ do hereby DENY consent to be governed by any and all parties. James Michael Barnes

No statutes can be deemed to apply to me, for they are the product of a governing body, one that I do not consent to.

I will not pay any taxes that you do not have a full affadavit of me agreeing to it with a wet signature and thumbprint, for the collection of taxes is a function of government and with my denial of consent, I free myself of any association with all governing bodies, and you have NO RIGHT to steal MY LIFE without my consent. I DENY any collusion with the "UNITED STATES" and THEIR BANKRUPTCY. Let THEM reap what they sowed.

I acknowledge I give up certain benefits and legal rights.


To Exercise all my NATURAL/Unalienable/Creator given rights and honor all mens rights to the same.

To live with Love, Understanding, Compassion, and TRUTH with all my fellow men on this EARTH. Even the ones perpetrating this fraud on all of us, if they can.

Until Honor, Justice, Truth, Compassion, and Right return to this country, I intend to work toward that goal, I see it as a necessary DUTY in my life and one that I cannot forego.


I Claim the Right to Non Interaction with ANY Goverment Agents whom haven't observed me breach the Peace, or have a Warrant with sworn and attested to affadavit of injury with nature and cause of the injury from a live human man or woman, and AT ALL TIMES restrict them to their Constitutional BOX, and keep them AT ARMS LENGTH or they are committing a TORT on my life which I can determine the value of and collect upon in ANY Court in the land. (For any FORCE laid upon me, mental or physical) Once served this document it becomes a valid contract agreed to by all parties involved, IF VIOLATED in any way shape or form.

I Claim the Right that if I am Killed or Die under ANY circumstances for ANY reason while held by ANY Goverment Agency, The Agency which is holding/seizing/arresting/kidnapping or interacting with me at the Time will Pay ANY of my family (The Family member will have a copy of this assigned to them with my signature/thumbprint and their nature and relation to me stated.) 5,000,000 Troy ounces of Gold .999 fine or equivalent in other precious metals readily tradable on the open market. My Life is worth alot to me and the ones I Love and whom Love me Back.

I Claim the Right that my written representation has one form and one Form ONLY: James Michael Barnes, No other form applys to me the living Human Man. I am not nor have EVER been back to my creation on this Earth Surety for any legal entity.

I Claim the Rignt not to have to wade through the MOUNTAINOUS PILES OF EXCREMENT legislators/lawyers/attorneys create with their words to execute my Liberty, they are their words let them abide by them, and live within the words they create.

I Claim the Right to record by any electronic means ANY interaction, with ANY Government Official, for the purpose of a record of the truth of the matter and the gathering of evidence to support the TRUTH, (which is my DUTY) and that this and ALL evidence will always be admissible in ANY court actions involving myself. No denying the truth and all of it I know to be told. (sorry we need all truth known to determine what is RIGHT not selected by you to hide the REAL truth.)

I Claim the Right that By denying representation I also deny anyone the use of any monies held in trust in my "persons" name "JAMES MICHAEL BARNES". I won't allow monies held in my "persons" name to be used to commit crimes on the people of this nation or the world, anyone caught using such funds in any form, way or manner, automatically agrees to a 25 year prison sentence without possibility of parole, and to pay me 10x the amount fraudulently used in Gold or precious metals openly tradable on the open market.

I Claim the RIGHT that If ANY INTERNATIONAL/FEDERAL/STATE Government agent violates ANY of these rights this document becomes a full and complete legal adhesion contract, enforceable by myself or my FAMILY in any court in the land If you DO NOT AGREE TO THIS CONTRACT then plain and SIMPLE..... LEAVE ME ALONE!!!

These rights include but are not limited to the right to private property, the right to travel on a public roadway without a license in any conveyance I choose, the right to carry on MY private business in anyway I choose, the right to choose what is and isn't put in MY BODY without interference and the right to bear ARMS to defend MY LIFE and of those I LOVE from the Criminals I am surrounded by.


This notice/affadavit will be directly served by registered mail to:

The Man known as: The President of the "UNITED STATES" or "United States of America" whichever HE claims
The Group known as: The Congress of the "UNITED STATES" or "United States of America" whichever they claim
The Group known as: The House of Representatives of the "UNITED STATES" or "United States of America" whichever they claim
The Group known as: The Supreme Court of the "UNITED STATES" or "United States of America" whichever they claim
The man known as: The Attorney General of the "UNITED STATES" or "United States of America" whichever HE claims
The man known as: The Secretary of the Treasury of the "UNITED STATES"
The man known as: The States Attorney General for Alabama state or "THE STATE ALABAMA" whichever he Claims (where I live)
The man known as: The States Attorney General for Florida state or the "STATE OF FLORIDA" whichever he claims (my permanent home until I return to GOD and area I was born)
The man known as: The Governor of Alabama state or "THE STATE ALABAMA" whichever he Claims
The man known as: The Governor of Florida state or the "STATE OF FLORIDA" whichever he claims

Notice: Man is inclusive and includes without limitation human beings of any sex.

I NOTICE THAT: Service to principal is service to agent and service to agent is service to principal.

and will be served directly on ANY Government Agent Claiming Authority over ME.

Dated ___________________


WITNESSED ____________________________________

WITNESSED ____________________________________

Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:08 pm
by Veronica
You have a fundamental problem in the united States.

It's called "Washington DC" which - as I'm sure you know - is not actually a State of the Union.


And the President of that Corporation is currently someone commonly called Barack: of the Obama family.

Now, he is NOT Constitutionally-qualified to hold the Office of President of the united States under the rules laid down in the US Constitution, because he was born in Mombassa.

But he IS qualified to be President of the UNITED STATES OF AMERICA CORPORATION, because - when it was formed - after the Civil War - IT DID NOT TAKE THE US CONSTITUTION OF 1787/88 as it's 'Company Policy'.

Thus Federal Courts do not recognise the US Constitution nor its Amendments as the Bill of Rights.

I think you need to work this in. Because it explains how they can get away with all those crimes you list.

Fundamentally you need to state that you are NOT an Employee of THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA CORPORATION ... never have been ... and never will be ... and they had no right to assume you had that 'status' just because your birth was registered. BECAUSE THAT WAS NOT A CONSCIOUS ACT ON YOUR PART.

Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:12 pm
by StimuL8
Appreciate it sweety. I've read most of your stuff and listened to your .mp3, and was already awake before I found them But you just helped to give it more clarity for me, will definitely examine and reevaluate it

sorry about the double post it said it had failed the first time with a sql error you can delete the other one for me.


Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:27 pm
by Veronica
StimuL8 wrote:sorry about the double post it said it had failed the first time with a sql error you can delete the other one for me.

Yes ... I know ... it's a problem with the current hosting. I've deleted the other one. No probs.

Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:47 pm
by StimuL8
I Changed it a bit but kinda felt I had Covered all bases with

ANY contract not arrived at with full knowledge and agreement as being VOID Ab Initio.

but check the change and see what ya think.


Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Sun May 09, 2010 8:55 am
by Prajna
Another way of expressing it is:

Mohandas Gandhi wrote:No action which is not voluntary can be called moral....Any action that is dictated by fear or by coercion of any kind ceases to be moral....Freedom of the individual is at the root of all progress.

Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Sun May 09, 2010 1:32 pm
by StimuL8
That is an excellent way of expressing it:

Mahatma wrote one that caught me;

I like your Christ. Too bad christians aren't like the christ.

It's paraphrased of course, but I laughed when I read it as I see it exactly that way.

Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Mon May 10, 2010 3:07 am
by StimuL8
Awww Come on folks 35 views and only V, and praj have comments, I started with a small thing in my mind and all the corruptness in the world exploded into it, isn't it about understanding and comprehension of the world today, I meant every word of it and every word on my blog, and you know what, it took alot for someone like me to even start a blog and alot of consideration as I was pouring my heart out into this.
I've been watching the forum for awhile and had read Mary Elizabeth's book like 15 times, but Robert Menards videos clicked it in my head and the good little slave switch went off, and I trust most peoples opinions on here or I wouldn't have asked, even want hooplescats to be honest, I don't bite and am very contemplative and will read and truly evaluate all comments.


And I'll do it like Mahatma Ghandi did it (Unlike the Government) peacefully, HONORABLY and without violence on ANY MAN or WOMAN.
oh and I'm a white 40's male not Black.......just telling the truth as I see it.

Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Mon May 10, 2010 9:41 am
by enegiss
hi stimul8, it looks good to me, sorry i cant help critique it anymore than this, but it does read well, and i wish you the best. peace

Re: Need People to review and critique all help appreciated

PostPosted: Mon May 10, 2010 9:46 am
by Veronica
I think it's pretty good.

I think what puts people off (from commenting) is the length. There is a school of thought that a NOUICOR should fit into a page of A4 ... (that's not, necessarily, my view btw!).

Personally speaking I'd go with it ... if it's what you "feel in your bones" ... because what you feel in your bones MUST be the Truth.

Yes ... Ghandi had a way with words. What was the other one? "Democracy ... yes ... that would be a good idea ..."